This is what I wrote:
WHOOSH! SPLASH! BOOM!
I’m on a waka slowly drifting into the ocean when suddenly someone shouts out, “Rocks Ahead!” I feel sudden pounding in my chest I'm scared SMASH! “We’ve hit a rock!” Suddenly my heart starts pounding even more faster then before its making me more scared then suddenly BANG! A strike of lightning came out of know where its a storm!. After 5 hours of hard stormy wet working we finally made it to…
Aotearoa
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